Friday, August 30, 2013

Fate: Chapter19

There are only 1 chapter left to this story</3. I really appreciate all the feedback I've been getting. I know it's not long ( although it's 1000 words), bes I devided the events into 2 chapters 3shan t5al9 elstory b20 chapters.

P.S:

There's a change of P.O.V bN9 elchapter fa la t7oson ;p

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Well, that was not expected. At all.

Maha: what? Leh? Esh 9ar?
Faisal: I had an accident and that made me lose the ability to have kids.
Maha: what happened? Tell me. I don't mind, really.
Faisal: ok, so at first it was a normal invasion. Then the beating started, a few kicks here and there and then one guy gave me a low blow.
Maha: ouch. That was it?
Faisal: esh gaylenlik? Mtzwja bzr?
Maha: ok ok yalla kamil.
Faisal: b3den we went out, and I was driving then we had a car crash.
Maha: why do you say these things kna ma 9arlik shy?
Faisal: bcuz compared to other things, ha4a wla shy.
Maha: go on, what happened blcar crash?

Of course, everything he told me about felt like a stab to my chest. He went through a lot of things like that in the past 5 years, so now whenever he talks about it; it feels like it's a normal thing to happen to him. He never shows how much pain he's in, even when we talked about the scars and the torturing he went through the past year. I get goosebumps whenever I remember what he told me, and the scars I see on his chest and back are a daily reminder.

Faisal: bes a car crashed into the one I was driving from my side, and well it broke a few ribs and did that.
Maha: when did that happen?
Faisal: a week after I got there.
Maha: why don't you ever tell me what happens?
Faisal: so you don't worry. You already worry enough.

I know how much it hurt him that we might not be having more children, but I didn't want him to feel guilty about it. I know that he'd take responsibility for it, and I thank god that I got pregnant earlier.

Maha: 3ady a9ln for now we'll have one kid, w b3den ngdr n3alij. Akeed fe 7al. Don't worry 7beby.
Faisal: walla w 9ayra romantic Mahoy 7beby w 7rkat, esh el6ary?

I laughed and hit him with a pillow.

Maha: osh bes, yallah 5leny anam wray dwam bokra.
Faisal: darya eny mar7 a5lek tsht3'len?
Maha: what, leh?
Faisal: 3shanik 7amel.
Maha: Faisal bla s5afa.
Faisal: minjdy!!
Maha: ok we'll discuss this later when I'm not half asleep.
Faisal: how did you sleep without me for 2 months?
Maha: the same way I've been sleeping without you for the past 22 years, a7i6 rasy w anam.

I heard him laugh and then say something about me not being romantic, at all. I was too far gone to focus on what he was saying.

Faisal's P.O.V:

I watched her sleep, and I started thinking about everything. My father was right, I have a kid now working m3 elmba7eth won't be as easy. Kther mn elmba7eth 3ind'hm 3wa2el w mashya omorhm?

Faisal: Mahoy?
Maha: hmm..
Faisal: tetw83en I should quit my job now?
Maha: laa..
Faisal: walla? Bes enty-
Maha: oshhh Faisal bnaam.

She put her hand on my mouth to shut me up, and she fell asleep. When I was sure she was in deep sleep I removed her hand from my mouth.

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We were going to my grandparents' house 3shan 3zema mswya ly, w ana jalis ant9'r Maha t5al9. My parents left 2 hours ago, I swear this woman will eventually kill me.

We have spent the past 2 hours in a hormonal mess. We went through 7 dresses, apparently everything made her look fat. She was barely showing! I really wished my sisters were home so they could suffer with this instead of me. I thought she looked beautiful in everything, but of course she wouldn't believe me. She said that I'm her husband I'm supposed to say that, but it was true!

Dress 1: 
She had on a pretty short purple dress that made her look really pretty, and fit her nicely.

Maha: nop ma agdr albes 4aa it's too short a5af your grandfather y4b7ny.

Dress 2: 
This dress was gold and it was longer than that one, but it was sleeveless.

Maha: we3 it shows the fat part of my arms.

Dress 3:
That one was pretty green color that showed off her tan, and matched perfectly the ring I got her. It tightened a bit in the stomach area, but I thought it was more than perfect, but Maha had other thoughts.

Maha: shof! It shows my baby bump.

Dress 4, 5, and 6:

Makes me look fat.
Too short.
Too sl*tty.
I don't have any shoes that match. (She has a closet for shoes, only.)

Dress 7:
It was a long white dress with a gold belt, I'm not good at describing clothes but it was a bit open from the back, and it didn't have a very wide chest opening.  She looked more than beautiful in that one, and I was not letting her change it.

Faisal: laa Maha wla t3'yren hlmarra.
Maha: bes!
Faisal: wla kilma! You look gorgeous, stunning, beautiful, and perfect. Yallah let's go.
Maha: bes sh3ry!
Faisal: 10 mins lw ma knty labsa 3baytik, I'm leaving you.

20 minutes later we were sitting in the car, and I had turned on the radio wl o3'niya ely ahdet'ha lha yom 56btna was on.

Faisal: do you remember?
Maha: shft el7yat bshoftik w 9'i7aktly tbdlt dnyay min hm lAfra7.

After the song was done, Maha talked about what were both worrying about.

Maha: kef bngolhm?
Faisal: ngolhm 3n el7amil w na8ely elyom, bes elmaw9'o3 elthani a7s a7sn lw bes darw 3nh ahli.
Maha: ee maby every family member ydry.
Faisal: ee a7sn lw 5lenah sr.
Maha: ok so mita ngolhm?
Faisal: b3d el3sha?
Maha: t7s omik w obok byz3lon l2nena ma glnalhm awl?
Faisal: tetw83en mafro9' glna elOur parents awl?
Maha: a7s a7sn lw we did.
Faisal: 5la9 bokrah lma nro7 nshof your parents ngolhm wl 9b7 ngol lAhli.
Maha: 6b elyom bes bngolhm 3an elna8il?
Faisal: ee 7beb-

Then everything went black.

xo 




11 comments:

  1. Elpost? Maraa ejanin! Jaaad amazing w talented glela 3laik x

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  2. OMG y7ms y7ms y7ms y7ms !!!!! Amana la t5leen albaby w faisal w maha ymooton aw y9eer feehm shy :'(!!!!! Btw you are a TALENT IN WRITING I'M SO IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY LOOOOVVVEEEE YOOUUU

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    1. AWWWWEEE! You're so sweeet thank you so much!

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  3. AMAZING!mashalla you're such a talented writer! Faisal is just too cutee!!! I LOVE YOU YA A7LA HALA!!!! Alla ystr min eli by9eer!! Post soon pls xx

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  4. i cannnt waaiitt 9dddg i cannnttt!!!!!!!!!

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  5. DON'T LOSE THE BABY. DON'T LOSE THE BABY. DON'T LOSE THE BABY.

    DON'T LOSE THE FREAKING BABY.

    I want to kill you, yet keep you breathing...is that possible?

    -B xo

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    1. I'm not exactly sure how that can happen, but I hope you liked it :D

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